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The twin writes the angry letter...
Dec. 6th, 2004 02:22 pm... to his former employer, but has little or no experience in this kind of thing. He emailed to me at work today.. at 6 AM! So I read through it. It's basically an angry rant in the form of a letter.. one very long catharsis in a single paragraph.
I'm glad he did this, but I replied that he shouldn't send this "as is." While the information in the letter is very good, it's presentation is lacking. No one will read this and view it seriously. Not his fault really, but the twin has never had to write anything close to this before and his English is a bit... off.
The letter is getting a re-write courtesy of yours truly tonight in the hopes of making it constructive and make those losers who fired him realize that maybe the true problem still remains in their employ. Not that I am the greatest of writers, but I think I can clean it up a bit.
I'm glad he did this, but I replied that he shouldn't send this "as is." While the information in the letter is very good, it's presentation is lacking. No one will read this and view it seriously. Not his fault really, but the twin has never had to write anything close to this before and his English is a bit... off.
The letter is getting a re-write courtesy of yours truly tonight in the hopes of making it constructive and make those losers who fired him realize that maybe the true problem still remains in their employ. Not that I am the greatest of writers, but I think I can clean it up a bit.
