The twin writes the angry letter...

[kybearfuzz]

... to his former employer, but has little or no experience in this kind of thing. He emailed to me at work today.. at 6 AM! So I read through it. It's basically an angry rant in the form of a letter.. one very long catharsis in a single paragraph.

I'm glad he did this, but I replied that he shouldn't send this "as is." While the information in the letter is very good, it's presentation is lacking. No one will read this and view it seriously. Not his fault really, but the twin has never had to write anything close to this before and his English is a bit... off.

The letter is getting a re-write courtesy of yours truly tonight in the hopes of making it constructive and make those losers who fired him realize that maybe the true problem still remains in their employ. Not that I am the greatest of writers, but I think I can clean it up a bit.

Comments

[bearhug111.livejournal.com]

Not implying anything by this, other than a genuine offer to help, but if you need any help with the proofreading or any word smithing assistance, I volunteer to look it over as well. :-)

[kybearfuzz.livejournal.com]

Hey Patrick, I appreciate the offer, really. My twin has all of the information he needs in the letter, but it just needed to be formatted, adding more statements of facts than asking questions. It didn't take long to clean up. Again, thanks ;)

.. and the Leonard and Larry mood icons are nearly done. I'll post the info when I'm done so you can use them if you want.

[bearhug111.livejournal.com]

Cool! I definitely want!

[cincycub.livejournal.com]

That was thoughtful of you. And smart of him to send it to you *beforehand* as opposed to more of an "oh look what I did today" sort of thing :)

[kybearfuzz.livejournal.com]

Strangely, the twin isn't usually that impetuous when it comes to business type things. I'm rather flattered he wanted me to proof it first.